i liked it!

Sad! Poor Nami, at least Hatchi cares! Arlong does too in an odd sort of way... I love this story!

Nice story! Lol, I understand your frustration on OOCs...but I ,as a matter effect, incorproate random things into a conversation...that seems to annoy my friends for some reason...

A very nice story!
I'm giving you a gold star... and a salty treat... and a cookie!