Reviews for Preseas' Problem

Reviews For: Preseas' Problem

Brendan Aurabolt 2007-07-30 ch 2,	abuseI remember reading this same story last year and wondered what became of it. It never got past the introductory chapter. here's hoping for frequent updates!
MysteriousLadyWhoLovesBubbl... 2007-07-25 ch 2, anon.	abuseAwh. Kawaii. I lurves j00
screamingedge 2007-07-22 ch 2,	abuseWow, there's finally another Preloyd (Seriously, there's been a damn huge gap when it comes to fans of the pairing)
Maurice A. Nigma 2007-07-22 ch 2,	abuseI've just finished reading the two chapters of your story and I've got to say that it's pretty good. I mean, both a Lloyd and Presea coupling fic is pretty rare to find around in this part of the site. You did a good job with introducing Presea's little problem for when she suddenly found herself pregnant with a baby of someone who just assaulted her without explanation. It's also good that you've managed to keep Lloyd's personality intact despite the years that have gotten him. In any case, the story is off to a good start depending if this story is short. If you're planning on making the story short, the put a bit of something that would allow the readers to remember it at least a bit. All and all, just try to have fun with it if you don't have the time or ideas to put up another chapter. It's not your homework. In any case, you did a really good job and I hope that you would put up another chapter of this fic. If you're having trouble with coming up with ideas on how the get the fic going, why not start with writing down ideas on a seperate sheet of paper? Start with writing down the beginning, then continue the middle, and then go with the end. That's what I'm trying to do with my own long fiction project. In any case, keep up the good work and take your time with it. Later! Maurice A. Nigma The Great Blue One
LittleLinor 2007-01-25 ch 1,	abuseOh, interesting idea... And Presea Lloyd is a rather rare couple I think... can't wait to hear more^^ well, read more XD
Kage Nightow 2007-01-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love you Rina, in the non lesbian way. Your side note were funny. XD But yes, that was a grand little story. Poor Presea. But if you think about it, wouldn't Lloyd be almost 30? XD That's an icky thought. rofl Lloyd nearing middle age...shudder XD cough Back to the story! You have some skill! >3 The dialoge was great, and letter was funny. >,< I think you could use some more inbetween, the descriptions and such. :3 -K.Nightow- The Awesomest :3

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