Good ff~! I love the concept and story. Also love your writing style! x3

tht was so cute! I loved it, you made it sound so real.

That was so sweet.. I am on my way to read the next two. Gracious!
Ja ne!

~Sesshy T.

Really well-written story~! I'm definitely not a fan of the Gojyo X Sanzo OTP, but this one was quite an unique experience. xD Not to say both of them were behaving very much in character, and yet were so shy and cute-sy. ( Oh, and Hakkai's views and opinions over others' relationships are always a big humor plus, hee! )

Thanks for sharing the story, hun~!

this is so sweet~

Very nice concept, and just as well carried out. Your writing style is pleasant and smooth to read, which helps enhance the peaceful sense of the story.
~Nait

That was really good.

Okay, that was sweet. 53 is not my OTP, (It's 39. x3) But I love the occasinal spice of GojyoSanzo. The way you brought it on made it almost believeable, (Which is hard because anythign with those two is believable)

Though I must say the idea of Gojyo and Sanzo sharing a room is hard to believe. Beofre Gojyo's confession I don't think Sanzo would stand for it. He'd be like, "I don't care who, but I'm rooming with anyone but the Kappa." Still, the idea of it was cute, and if not for that I don't think Gojyo could have wiggled into Sanzo's bed. (Another cute part, I may add. It made me go all, 'aw...')

All in all, a well rounded and adorable fic. I enjoyed it.
-Windy

owh...that is one thing i'd most probably do with someone heheheh! Great! you just gave me an idea! i'll go and try this metta method hehehe

ah i see another one of befanini's converts. cute story. i love the whole gojyo/sanzo thing, and you covered it well.

keep up the good work. ^.^x

I don't usually go for Gojyo/Sanzo, but this was really quite good! I love the Buddhist meditation idea. Very original as far as I'm concerned. Great job!

Well...like Sanzo I don't have words. I like it very much, this is my favorite pair. I've never seen Sanzo so calm, without shooting anyone, but I like that. And Gojyo so cute, trying to meditate.
The most beautiful, the confession, so romantic. Good job! :D

So very Zen. So very pure in its simplicity, and yet so complex too. Bravo for writing yet another wildly deviant 53 - we need more of those; and what I mean is a GojyoxSanzo that looks beneath the surface antagonism and hostility and uncovers their human, fragile, vulnerable selves that fit so beautifully together.

*sigh* Happy, happy fangirl. ^_^ Do write more! This was so restrained, so classy, so intelligent. I absolutely LOVED it!

p.s. Thanks for the "free advertising too". Ekeke. XD

I'm so thrilled I converted you to the Fluff Rules All! school of thought *bwahwaha* *cough* Anyway, thanks for understanding my critiques that I gave you about siblings and phraseology and colon-usage... that sounded wrong, but anyway! VERY cute and nice for a one-shot! :D
~Shin-No-Nekochan >o+ >|

aw, cute ending. i'd imagine that sanzo would be a bit more gruff and a harder resistance, but this works too for a oneshot. meditation, huh? sounds very interesting, maybe i should try that with a certain someone in my life. hehehe, well, really good fic you have here, keep it up! there's not very many good sanzo and gojyo fics out there with more than just lemons and lust. so good job!