Oh my god - So adorable!

Aw that was rele sweet and jus aw! Naru/Sak makes a rele cute pair even though it's not my fav! loved it! ~ Myra-chan

This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.

Naruto's necklace isn't a cross. And Sakura is older than Naruto.

MY FACE! AH
BURN IT, BURN IT, BURN IT! BASE!
WHITE LINES!

That was so cute! ~ Myra-chan

I have to agree with Satyanasi on it being (to say the least) pretty bad, even though her criticism sounded closed-minded.

I have to say, you really didn't master Sakura's character... I had to click the back button to make sure it was a NaruSaku and not a NaruHina (I hate NaruHina). Even if it did state some obvious external traits of Sakura, it didn't capture her spirit. Or Naruto's. Naruto is 'cute'... not a smooth-talker like some of the other male characters might be.

And a couple of errors I have to point out: Naruto calls Sakura nothing BUT 'Sakura-chan', Sakura's 7 months older than Naruto, and Sakura has never used a suffix on Naruto's name.

Is this an AU? 'Cause it certainly wasn't consistent with Naruto's clothing, or the general clothing style of the Naruverse: no character in Naruto has ever worn a cross.

The grammar was imperfect, but not terrible...

The use of poetic device was the only really redeeming quality. I like the use of stylistic fragments. Wonderful impact, you get a cookie for that.

You get a C minus. I'm feeling generous today.

well this was a bad story
sakura would never say naruto-kun
it doesn't fit the personality
sorry but i can not give this a passing grade
i didn't even bother to finish reading that how bad it was
2/5

I love Naruto and Sakura fluff. Keep up the great work.

That was so sweet and romantic! I liked it.