 Diabolical Kitsutora 2009-01-10 . chapter 10Awesome story so far, I can't wait for you to continue. I did find a few misspellings but due to being awake with little to no sleep, I can't say I remember where it was I found them.
All I can say is that the ones I found aren't information altering, so, just look over your chapters closely, maybe read them out loud and make sure they make sense. |
 4mewmew4 2007-04-05 . chapter 10Now that I'v read all the chapters you have, I can't wait for the ending! This story is SO sad, I sure hope everything will work out ok. Please update soon! |
 4mewmew4 2007-04-04 . chapter 1Awesome story! I've only read chapter 1 so far but it looks great. I feel so sorry for Meroko! :) |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 10aw and oh my god, sweet mereko...-sniff- so cute! i loved this... |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 9I think I might cry...= T ...-sigh- Please Mitsuki dont do somehting stupid. Hurry up and realize that there is someone else there who would give their whole life for you. -shakes head- love is so powerful eh? Nice chapter mate :) |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 8“That cat guy - I don’t know his name - he’ll look after you.”
^ haha omg that was funny. the whole atmoshphere was so tense and everything and in the middle of it, while he's in such a harsh position he says that, hah, its all good. Awesome write! |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 7this is TO good! = D I love this! Omg please Eichi just listen to Takuto, meet Mituski and then you can die and give Mitsuki back to Takuto...-_- I really dont want Eichi to die, but I really want Mitsuki and Takuto...u get the drift it... |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 6-gulp- : T You can say I feel my nerves all frozen. I feel the sadness coming ...oh dear this is good...(i should be doing my hw right now though, hehe) |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 5I LOVED THE ENDING OF THIS!! -twirls- yay! this is good! I cant wait to see whats going to happen between Eichi and Mitsuki with Takuto in between... |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 4Aw this chapter was so cutely sweet! I'm liking this :) |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 30__0 Her name is on the book?? Is she a threat to herself because she's a kultz? Oh dear, Takuto's probably feeling like ...crazy right now...oo and what's going to happen about the dance? I cant wait for more on that...
hehe, o Eichi is alive eh? Interesting...Great chappy mate! ;) |
 Writer Elsewhere 2007-03-18 . chapter 2o, hehe wonder how Takuto is going to reply! Good chappy! ;) |
 animeluv12 2007-03-02 . chapter 10yay another chapter up!!lol i just love how u update daily >. |
 XxXxFallen-AngelXxXx 2007-02-28 . chapter 9I havent finished the manga either,but im up to book 7,bc i read online,if you`d like the link i dont mind sharing it,lol anyways love this ch! :) |
 animeluv12 2007-02-27 . chapter 9yay thx for chapter 9 ^_^ hehe just love reading your fanfics for FMWS |