The story itself was good (the whole story) but i didnt lik ethe first person in it . I didnt like how there was first and third only one person should've been used

Wow.

Just.

Wow.

I enjoyed this story alot, and it seemed realistic. There are a few minor errors here and there, but all in all, this was a really good story. By the way, are my boring reviews getting on your nerves yet?

PRYDAIN! I LUV PRYDAIN! And fairies are FUN!

Hm. Not bad. Considering it was your first HP fanfic, it's not all bad. An interesting concept. Well-outlined. Enough plot-twist to make it follow the Harry Potter theme. Not bad. Not bad a'tall.

hiiii! guess who i am... go on guess...

well, then, i'll tell you! ::whispers:: *Kelsey* WOW! never saw THAT coming DID you? well whatever you're h/h ::scowls:: fine... but consider this...:

"Well if you dont like it, you know what the solution is, don't you?" yelled Hermione; her hair was coming down out of its elegant bun now, and her face was screwed up in anger.

"Oh yeah?" Rong yelled back. "What's that?"

"Next time there's a ball ask me before someone else does, and not as a last resort!" -pg. 432 GoF. what does THAT mean to you? and she SCOWLED when Fleur onee SMILED at ron! and krum's ARM! CANT YOU PUT TWO AND TWO TOGETHER! and the internal STRUGGLE! (pg725 GoF) ::sobbing::

::hyperventilating:: but besides the whole... pairing issue, that was good. like I said in my other review... didn't I? Oh well... now I did.

*Kelsey*

hey, its kelsey, reviewing like a GOOD ICKLE GIRLIE [cheers for me!] but yeah, that was a great storie even IF i'm harry/ginny ron/hermione. i realize we have some disagreements I WILL straighten out... mwahahaha... oh, one thing, can brooms GO that fast? and why is a plane flying onee at 200 ft? this tickles my brain [starts giggling] MEEHEEHEE! IT TICKLES! WHEEEEE!

i like it ::smiles::

oooh! so good! good job!

Oh, look at me! I REVIEWED! [beams] God girl, Christine. Cute story, Claire. The whole "H&H" thing pissed me off, but what the heck! It's all fun until someone loses an eye. Otay... keep it up... and all the boring stuff that comes after that... THE END! Bai bai, see you on monday... [groan]

Oh - my - gosh! This is officially the best ron-got-kidnapped story I've read and I've read a bunch! I enjoyed every minute of it, and that's no lie! I'm off to read more of your fics!

BRAVO! Good story! I encourage you to write more! I think I'll start one for the heck of it! SHOOT! PACKERS ON IN NINE! SEE YA

Leah

Wowee... that's amazing... last chapter... by the way, this is a good story! I like the plot! It's unique. Moving on the the next chapter! I'm on a time crunch cuz the Packers are playing in 15 minutes!

Leah

Oh my goodness... more chapters to read... see ya

Leah

This is different... wow... is she REALLY dead? OK I have to read the next chapter now!

Leah

Holy moly! I was right! lol! Cool.. I'm psyco-I mean pscycic... lol That's scary.. I am going to read the next one now...

Leah