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| SilverHowler 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseGood, good, good! Please update soon, ´kay? XD |
| RiverDeep 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abusethis is a great start. i'm really worried about Nick can't wait for the next chapter. |
| AlexCurtis 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseAwesome keep it up |
| kelticsgirl 2007-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abusehi I love what you have so far hope to read more soon!! thanks |
| Kara 2007-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey i enjoyed this story it was really good i would love to read the rest of it, Its sounds like its gonna be interesting, i am looking forward to reading more of this story. Thank you Kara |
| SassySasha19 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseGood start. I found it interessting that it was in the POV of the doctor. Do you plan on keeping it that way? Or are you going to switch POV's throughout? Nice chapter, looking forward to the next one. |
| Bettle Bug 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great start! Please update! |
| NicknGrisfan 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseContinues it. I love it, Snickers. Good jobs. |
| Sarabear08 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseAww poor Greggy, Poor Nicky. Please update soon i can't wait to read more. Kasey |
| wraiths-angel 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abusewow, this looks really good and looking forward to the next chapter! |
| GregsLabrat 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat chappy, can't wait for more. |
| csiluver123 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME CHAPTER! this story sounds like it's goin to be da bomb! LOL. Write more! |
| necira 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abusegood start. the point of view change is different, but works with the story. |
| Gear's Girl 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseMore! More! excellent Start! I love the style keep it up. |