Aeris: (shivers) Malik is so disturbing for trying to creat his mama...

Cloud: I remember all the Mother Clones he created. I felt a slight twinge of disgust when I learner that Malik wanted to replace his own parent.

Aeris: Is this a one-shot? If it isn't, CONTINUE IT PLEASE!!

Cloud: I like it, only a few grammar problems but that's about it.

Aeris: Cool story! (adds to Faves) Tee hee, Melody has a crush on Malik...who would have thought it?

I just wanted to leave a review for you and let you know I really like the style here. You created a a great one shot and I might not know the fandom, but I like what I see. Cool characters and striking dialogue. ^_^

Mm, very nice! I'm loving the banter and the tension, here. I also like how you've portrayed, well, all of the Prophets. Keep up the good work; I'm expecting more great things from you. ^_^