Aww, Erin, this story almost made me cry... ='[

I do have a proposal for you. I know its something you havent done before, thus my reason for asking... but.. would you think about writing a... mature Aj ff? If done write, it could possibly be the best story ever. =]

Your an amazing writer, and I think you have the talent to do such a task.

Meg

ver good, i applaud you. -presses button for appluase- clap clap

Love your style of writing. It's simple, to the point, and moving at the same time. :)

OMG! that was so good! why don't you write songfics more often?

It made me cry, but in a songfic like this one, that's good -- iguess... anyway, keep it up, and i'll try and review more often!

alanna22039 :D

Very nice, I liked it a lot. Just one thing, couldn't you've made it have a happy ending? I like happy endings... anyway it was absolutely fantastic! Please keep writing!

Aw - Sad but, as ever, wonderful!

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I swear this song is perfect for anything with these two in it XD

It's not over.
BEAUTIFUL PIECE. So haunting. Love the angst!

nice one-shot.

AW! I loved it! It was so sad and I adore it. You characterized their responses to the fight well, I think, and it was comforting to know they still felt something for the other. Nicely done.
kt

Exquisite.

Nice love/hate relationship going there. You said 'She was now writing toward Port Caynn' but you meant to say riding instead of writing(makes more sense, eh?) and Myles of Olay is spelled Olau. That's all my freak twin, Ruler of Spelling And Gramatical Mistakes, has to say, so good job!
I really liked the two differant P.O.V.'s that you showed here, and adding in Josiane was nice. I thought their character's(Josiane and Delia) were a bit OOC, Josiane seemed more crazy and outgoing instead of flirty and quiet, while Delia would have gotten back at Josiane for stealing Jonathan. I think thats it, so great job!
~Aly

Interesting. I'd never really thought about how Josaine and Jon met. nice song fic.

-MSB

OH MY GOD.

This was so freaking awesome! I love this so much.

I love this song! so nicely written.. I liked the thoughts and anguish of alanna and jon.. it was great.. nice ficlet
Caiti