you should continue this

Interesting and slightly sad twist at the end.

Loved it! ^_^

Ah, sweet dream stories. Who can't help but admire them?

Aw. Poor Riza-chan. This was a very good oneshot. Thankies for the good read!

Yay the twist ending! It would still have been great without it, but the twist gave it extra originality. Despite having read many, many FMA fics, I've never read one with the "it was just a dream?" twist.

a word or two to the wise: saying "But Edward is not the only one in a dream..." in the preview kills the twist. also, never admit defects beforehand. it's just going to make people not want to read your story. put the admissions of guilt at the *end* of the story (you have nothing to be apologizing for, by the way). that twist wasn't really weird; in fact, it's pretty much a standard thing. also, at one point you refer to ed as a man, where you probably ought to be referring to him as a boy, as this story is undoubtedly pre-Conqueror of Shamballa. it may not seem to shine a favorable light on Riza (lusting after a boy), but trust me, no one will care. decent story, though.

That was really good, I liked it a lot. Nice twist, and everyone seemed to be ic, so don't worry. ^^

That was almost sad. I like Ed/Riza. Good writing though.

aw! I feel bad for Riza...

endin pretty interestin...if only it was real n not a dream for riza lol...luv it though was so cute lookin forward to ur nxt fic on the pair

It was a little odd to see a Riza/Ed fic, but the writing was nice, so I think it turned out well.

CUTE... haven't thought much into that pairing, bet it'd be nice to see more.. :P