Loved this! You get who Todd Manning is and who Jack Manning should be, once he matures. He's had two of the worst male role models any kid could possibly have. As much as I love the character of Todd Manning, he won't win any father of the year awards. I wish you were writing for OLTL right now. Great one-shot, DA!

[BTW, are you planning on writing any multi-chapter fics for the Luminous mb? We need more writers. :)]