 Concolor44 3/19/11 . chapter 1Cool as liquid nitrogen, the pair of 'em. And, dare I say it, perfect for each other, in a weird, unexplainable way.
I liked this very, very much. You can tell how each of them battles the day-to-day boredom in his or her own way. I'm sure the prospect of getting to know each other better is whetting their appetites like nothing else has in a LONG time. |
 Esther 7/16/09 . chapter 1 I sort of want you to continue this one just becaue I like how you portratied the two charaters. |
 Sea-Glass88 1/7/09 . chapter 1I really liked that. I love the pairing Rae/X and there aren't a lot of good fics about them out there. Good work! :) |
 ultra dragon 11/18/08 . chapter 1very nice! i really loved this. |
 Chi Yagami 2/5/08 . chapter 1hahahahahahahaha! Raven enters the party, greets all the titans, and pulls out WHO? Red X! lol that would be interesting to read... :D Great Story yet again! |
 Jinnx 11/27/07 . chapter 1ahh...its cute. i like it.
wow that was totally out of character for me |
 dragonprincess1988 10/12/07 . chapter 1very cute |
 royfan 6/20/07 . chapter 1 this is so good! i love the way she 'asked' him to be her date! i know you said this was a oneshot, but is there any way i can convince you to write another chpater? please. |
 DarkYeuX 5/28/07 . chapter 1MY GODD! THIS STORY IS SO CUTE! XD! I LOVE IT! SOO AWESOME! X3! CUTENESS TO THE MAX AND MORE! XD! LOVE UR STORY! . C YAS! |
 SanzoGirl 5/14/07 . chapter 1so cute! |
 Arcaten 2/4/07 . chapter 1A pretty good story. Raven was OOC, but I think you wanted her that way. Keep up the great writing. |
 Drifting One 2/1/07 . chapter 1I LOVE IT! I love this so much! *promptly adds to favorites* |
 apricot.pie 1/31/07 . chapter 1okayy.
I totally didn't mean to and happened on this pairing and it didn't occur to me it was you then I read your name and that little qoute and it was like...
BANG
and everything came back to me!
::D
so cute! I love the way you write like... idk its hard to explain but I love it!
great jobb! |
 Koyoru 1/28/07 . chapter 1Tee hee!
Have you ever seen the Wallace and Gromit movie? Curse of the Were-Rabbit? There's this one part where Wallace pops his head out of the neck of his shirt and he shakes his head and goes "tee hee" and I laugh really hard each time.
Well, since I don't really giggle, well, I do, but I don't really enjoy it, your fic made me "tee hee" and I really liked it.
I most doubly agree with the other person that review, you should update this and write another chapter to it and show everyone trying to figure out who the hell the new guy is. Oh! But don't Raven's powers go hay-wire when she feels some sort of strong emotion? Well, 5 years later I suppose one can expect powers to develop and control to be achieved.
So! Back to the topic at hand, I really like your story! I like the idea of him being an ordinary citizen when he's not wearing the mask. But, I also liked that other person's idea of him giving money to that orphanage and wanting to adopt the little girl and the little boy and his stealing for money to support the orphenage. Anyways! You should most definitely continue this story. I can't promise that I'll always review, and I can't promise that my reviews will always be this long. I suppose you're lucky and you caught me in an reviewing mood. Lucky you. So, please review?
I suppose if you don't want to, that's fine too. Send me an e-mail, let's talk Raven and Red-X! Or, my other favourite pairing is Kid Flash and Jinx, can I possibly get you obsessed with that? Or, you know, X-men Evolution. I'm in love with the Romy pairing or Rogue and Remy, and the best story out there for that pairing would either have to be "The Ante" or "Xanadu" seriously, both amazing, descriptive and just freaking amazing. So, send me an e-mail, oueah?
Koyoru |
 Marianela 1/27/07 . chapter 1 oh please continue the story..because is incredible..please udpate soon or only write other story because you have an excellent imagination...well..bye!
Your fan..Marianela...
Ki$$e$! |