Wow! Great story! I see you haven't updated for YEARS! Please do so soon.

You MUST finish this soon! I love it! Come on, I'm on the edge of my friggin' seat here!

great start. cant wait for the new chapters.

You left me hanging, where's the rest of this story?

MORE SOON PLEASE?

Ooh, good start. I can't wait for more chapters! and you should be into the R stuff! It's the best!

Not bad, I like how Deamon became Deamon, it's a fresh idea.

This is cute. So far, you've got a good story going, with some action, humor, and new, believable characters.