|Reviews for Broken Flower's Lullaby|
| La Petite Rose 5/31/08 . chapter 1
| MochaCocaFan 5/14/08 . chapter 1
It's very well written, but I couldn't say 'nice'.
I hate it when people say 'nice'.
Yeah, excluding my idiosyncrasies, this is brilliant.
It's so dark and angsty without making me want to puke.
This reminds me of another book:
"Exquisite Corpse" by Poppy Z. Brite.
Or at least a little bit when the main character is at the end.
Well, be proud!
| DeityofDeath17 8/7/07 . chapter 1
I always thought Ino loved her body and loved to show it off, but whatever, it's your fic
I felt in Ino's possion before when someone that I liked turned me down. Take care and update soon!
| Merridaine 7/23/07 . chapter 1
Aw bless her. Really shows how it grasps you and wont let go
| ahou-hime 3/1/07 . chapter 1
hm...i dunno but this just as good as ur other stories...maybe its just way to ooc for me...cause inos all prideful and crap like that eating disorders just arent her thing sakura and hinata maybe but not ino also ino is underaged in ur story rehabulation isnt a choice for her next time just keep that in mind ok?
angst just isnt ur thing...comedy is what u write teh best!
**ps ino has ninjutsu not tai and its spelt 'dying' not 'dieing' quicke tipe for u**
| SasuSaku4eva 1/28/07 . chapter 1
good stry but i wanna point somethings ou ino is only 15 she doesnt have a choice to rehab
2 she has ninjutsu not tai
3 do a little bit more reserch befor u wrte another anorexia stry cause you got some things reall off
this isnt a flame i was just correctin good stry u should wrte a series where she has it ad gets with shika! then she and sakura can be fasting buds or sumthing ur a good wrter so itd work!
| Elsie0o0 1/27/07 . chapter 1
aww Nat, what a beautifully sad story. I really liked it. It made me feel like crying, especially what you told me the other day. Take care, okay? Your friend, Elsie.
| IshtarPiccolo 1/26/07 . chapter 1
But. . Ino's not fat. .
| Oxygen Pirate 1/26/07 . chapter 1
aw this story made me all sad... i love ino!
| Anorexia 1/26/07 . chapter 1
(Sadly for poor Ino, since she's underaged, going to Rehab isn't really her coice...sucks alot...)
Very pretty. I love how well you're forming from Comedy to Angst and you're able to write both. It was the good kind of short-fic too which is also really nice since it's hard to find work like that. And I must say, you captured her selfhate very well. Wonderful work!