BRING BACK CLOUD AND GET HIM TO KICK ASS ALREADY

THE SUSPENSION IS KILLING ME

and longer chapters please

Yay! Though I agree, Cloud makes things much more interesting. But keep it up, I always look forward to updates--this is by far the best novelisation out there!

This story is absolutely riviting i can never get enough of your writing. I really enjoy all 3 installments. i agree this next part isn't the funnest part in game, but i still would like to read it. I hope you get back to this story. I want to turn your story into a book, for a private collection of mine, your story really is that great. I was also considering a talk with the developers of the game and run this story by them for a novel for production if it was okay with you. You would get complete credit for writting the story along with your name on the book, all i ask is you finish this superb story.

UPDATE! I really like your writing, and, having no access to the game, this is the way I'm getting the details of the story. So yes, please remember that you have this going, and that we all appreciate your finishing it!

...lol, oh wow. How stupid am I. Just made a comment about Cid losing his spear, and completely missed the part where Red caught it. XD

Awesome, Awesome chapter! Loved Vincent's plan. Shame Cid lost his spear/gravity materia though. Look forward to seeing more!

Oh i'm so glad I found this story again, took me awhile to find! I know exactly what you mean, the only reason I like Fort Condor is because of Phoenix and the free bed XD Can't wait for your next update and for Cloud to join the party again!

THANK YOU!
I was waiting for this!
Keep up this awesome work!

Nice Novelization! I already read the last two instalments! You also did a nice job on the characterization! Keep up the good work!

Dude this story has been amazing so far. and this is by far my favorite game in the world. and you were doing a great job of writting it. but it seems you've stopped writing this story. Why? it was so so good. and you promised you'd finish this story. you should start writting the story again.=]

Please update,we have been waiting long enough for this.

I wish you'd update, but it seems as though you've abandonned the story. Oh well - it was great while it lasted. :) Thanks for writing this novellisation anyway!

Even though I have not read the whole thing, I can tell Its going to be great. So keep up the good work while I read your masterpiece, which I'm sure it is. If its not too much trouble you should check out my bio and then my first story and then review and tell me what you think of it.

LOL... The Tifa-Scarlet slapping match... I've been waiting for that... Haha... :)

Yay! Thanks for updating! :)