aw that was cute hahahha san is so playful! ^-^

Very, very, VERY beautiful. Like insanely fluffly crack :D

A satisfying fic for the hopeless romantics out there, not excluding myself. Very nice work, I liked how you managed to get the message across without getting too detailed ;) Good job.

that was amazing i started to think there was gonna be a lemon but it was beyond belife somehow you got it through to me with out all the detail of other storie n/e-way it was remarkable good going

I could say it felt a bit pointless, but I think the romantic genre is a bit beyond me. Still I'm quite glad that you put so much detail into making a nice small scene between the 2 of them passionate, visual and almost poetic.
In short, it's very well done.

that was so amazing!! you are a wonderful writer and that was such a touching scene...i alomost cried! i loved it! it was great for a one shot!

Nice little story for the romantics among us.

Now back to work on the trilogy.

Beautiful story.

Nice to see them able to find a small moment to themselves.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza