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Lock.VII
2007-05-01 . chapter 1
aww, so cute!
i love the whole "Love bug" and "Crush fiend" terms, haha, so cute.
And i love how Gippal totally contradicts himself, saying he dosen't want to be her boyfriend, yet marching in and demanding why he hasn't called, looked, or talked to him.
lol
awsome fic as usual~
DisappearingLife
2007-03-18 . chapter 1
Wow. I love your writing style and how you portrayed them both. It was so on the dot!
Warui-Usagi
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Loved this one, too. :D It was awesome!
whereowhere-is-my-rabbit
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
bugger, and just when i had decided that you were most in tune with gippal you come up with this fic. Rikku was so adorable in it, especially with the love bug and crush fiend. and for some reason i loved the line "I like her nose. It’s very cute." it seemed so sweet to me. and the part about the fire spells was so typically rikku. it's a really beautiful fic. ^^
Isabella Swan
2007-02-01 . chapter 1
aw i loved it!
Dizzied
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
AHahahhaa! I love how Rikku and Gippal thinks. I love the phrases, "love bugs" and "crush fiends". It seems just like something Rikku would come up with.

-skips in the tulips- Another wonderfully nice and descriptive CUTE fic :3! When I say descriptive, I mean how you write out their thoughts.
FairyIce
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
That was great, I like how realistic the nature of their relationship was, how they both were on two different pages about it in the beginning, and how it all came together in the end. Very nicely written, awesome job as usual :D
japi-girl
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
OMG! HOW DO U WRITE SO GOOD? I'm glad my reviews make you happy! OMG! I LOVED THIS WHOLE THING! You write so diferent than all of the other writers I know and I luv ur style of writing for that!! PLZ MORE!! Take care and God bless!
GeorgiaPeaches
2007-01-27 . chapter 1
nice. i like it.
Verre
2007-01-26 . chapter 1
I haven't been actively reading in this fandom for a while now, so this was a very pleasant hook. Please say that there's more where this came from!
Tee Vee
2007-01-26 . chapter 1
Ooh! I absolutely LOVED this! The way you wrapped it up, the last line, that was amazing. I didn't understand why you put "look" in italics in the last part at first. I had to read it like, twice over. Heheh. Clever! To be honest, I didn't really think the second line of "Relentless" made the sort of impact you wanted it to. To me it sort of seemed like you just sort of threw the titles together and worked with whatever came to you. Don't get me wrong, though. I really did love this. One more thing, about your Al Bhed in "Effortless," you have it mixed up. I assume you're trying to say, "Happy Birthday," but it came out "Rippe Bontrdie." It's supposed to be "Rybbo Pendrtya." I don't know if that helps my meaning on the fact that you have your translations reversed. Okay. Keep writing, keep smiling!

SMILE! :)
okapiangel
2007-01-26 . chapter 1
I love it :) Its very good -- I love the feeling where everything is resolved, but nothing is at the same time. Very lifelike :)
Procrastinator-starting2moro
2007-01-26 . chapter 1
I really love this :) You always manage the capture the characters so perfectly.
Seelenspiel
2007-01-26 . chapter 1
It's amazing how nicely you showed such a realistic type of relationship between them.
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