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| Dreamer22 2008-05-17 ch 8,  | abusevery well done I'm enjoying this though I must admit that I'm not sure if this if finished or not...please let me know |
| Dreamer22 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuse::snorts:: ohh my! well done! |
| K.C.-Clark 2007-08-08 ch 8, | abuseThe story was interesting, a little confusing but interesting. I think it has a lot of potential. You seem to have crammed a lot of information into a few paragraphs and that can be a little difficult to understand. Also you should think about the format. It's good but when someone speaks make it a new paragraph, it can get a little confusing for the reader if you don't. But other than that it was pretty good. Great post and I'm really sad that it's the only Mac/Lindsey story on here. I'm thinking about writing one but I'm not really sure about what yet. I think you should update soon though. I want to know what happens. Oh, and btw, I think Payton looks like she's sucking on a lemon all the time to. She just really annoys me for some reason. -KC |
| InDe 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseHey... I just found this story and I LOVE it! Please post SOON! InDe |
| chili-peppers 2007-07-16 ch 8, | abuseHehe!Very hot! Great writing! Can't wait for more! |
| lullabymoon 2007-07-15 ch 8, | abusevery hot! I really liked it and as much as I liked the angst, I'm glad their together now. |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-07-15 ch 8, | abuseI loved it. I am so glad to see you posting more of this story. Please post more soonish. Brandy |
| Mac's Girl 2007-07-11 ch 7, | abuseWhoo awsome update! Please add more. And don't worry, I'm working updating my Mac and Lindsay story soon. |
| chili-peppers 2007-06-02 ch 7, | abuseBrilliant chapter! Can't wait to see Peyton's reaction lol Great work :D |
| tonik2255 2007-06-02 ch 7, | abuselove it cant beleive lindsay crumbled and told him though ...gonna be nice to see peton explode when mac and lindsay go back to ncis :) so looking forward o that as always plz update soon |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-06-01 ch 7, | abuseI loved it. I hope someone postes some new Mac/Lindsay story so we can get more of this story. I love it. Please post more soonish. Brandy |
| Mac's Girl 2007-05-20 ch 6, | abuseHoly Hannah! Awsome chapter. Please add more! |
| chili-peppers 2007-05-18 ch 6, | abuseWow! That last part was hot! Awesome job! Can't wait for the next part! |
| Canary1984 2007-05-18 ch 6, | abuseThat was hot, that last part. I'm very curious how you're going to get them together. 'Cause I would really see Mac & Lindsay be an item. So keep up the goog writing. Can't wait for the rest of it |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-05-18 ch 6, | abuseWow! If I was Lindsay I would so leave my fake marriage and take Mac up on his offer. lol. Please post more soon. Brandy |