please write sequel I am begging you and forgetting about self respect right now

write a sequel

Toadally beast

when u said "poseidons underwater palace" i thought u said

"poseidons underwear palace"!

This was really good! I loved reading it!

italians would have been such a crack if hades melted from the shodows and said "alright, comeon" *giggles*

this was a great story.you should write another one.

I love it! It's so cool! I would say "update", but you already ended it. :)

What does Ember want to show percy?

Wow, I just spent the past hour reading this, and I was tatally blown away. Your plot: excellent. Canon characterization: excellent. The only thing that wasn't as good was Emerald's character. I don't want to call her a Mary Sue because she really isn't, especially as Aphrodite's daughter, although you maybe could have named her something else. It was more that there wasn't enough depth to her character; even with what you talked about regarding her background and home life, she still came off as kind of flat. That being said, amazing job, I really enjoyed it!

make them long

AWESOME! I totally love how Percy was cheated by Emerald, that was funny . . . and about Emerald, you were really good at making her personality come to life.

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Faith

which book is this?

LOL. Excellent ending! I liked how you handled the situation with Kevin, and the note from Aphrodite was a nice touch. :D

It'd be cool if you would write another fic for PJO, too.

-Tig

Wow! Great ending, couldn't find any typos and the tone of the story was really great, I love how Aphrodite asked him to go on a shopping trip with Emerald and herself, added a bit of comic relief to the ending :D!

Still! I can't believe this is the last chapter. However, you ended it nicely, not too rushed or anything, so it was enjoyable but at the same time a little sad...

About the A/N: Yes, DEFINTELY write more for this series- PJO needs more stories, though there are twicefold than a few months ago. Wonder what the next one will be?

Phyco girl