This story was excellent
Very heartbreaking that the two die but it was also beauiful in my opition
They get to die together and don't have to witness the other death
I really love the their kiss in the cell
It was very passionate
I would like to think that they are in Heaven instead of Hell because as the story said where they were was their Hell
You're also an excellent writer and this story earns a seat on my favorite

so... *snif* sad... Loved it. Nuff said.

Holy... :O
That was one of the scariest things I have ever read. And so well-written too! :O
I was literally shaking and close to crying as I read it... Really heart wrenching... And really original.

And I can picture the last part happening; both of them dying happy... *faves*
I love you. D:

ah. this is so depressing.

Damn that stupid Christian girl! Who does she think she is to judge others' lives!! How much I'd LOVE to strangle her to death!

That was the saddest thing I ever read. I can hardly see what I'm typing right now because of my uncontrollable sobbing. Those last four lines brought me to tears. I never cry, but this made me sob hard for fifteen minutes. My mom got scared, kept asking me what happened, I finally told her that Ed and Al were murdered because of their sexual relationship. She gave me a weird look and muttered "damn Fullmetal Alchemist" and walked away from me, my body wracking with forlorn cries.
I cannot believe people have done such cruel things in the past just because of love. I hate that; I really believe if you truly love someone you can be with them, no matter age, gender or blood relationship. I'm Christian, I hate what my people have done to others in the past. It makes me sick... That is why I sit here and type, clenching my fist as tears of fury leak down my reddened cheek. If my proffesors ever teach me about those damned witch hunts, I swear I'll break out into tears in my desk, whispering "Al" and "Ed" while everyone stares.
You are an excellent author, you deserve so much more praise than you receive.

...oh my god...this made me cry; and I NEVER cry...just two tears; but that was more than I shed when I found out my grand mother died. so; if this made me cry, this is a VERY good story that can touch even the coldest of athiest hearts.

It was beautiful... I loved it.

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THAT WAS AWESOME!

It made me wanna cry...

Oh nos!
that was so sad :(
killed for loving someone. thats gotta be one of the most ** up things ever.
it was good though. real good.
keep writing!

Oh. My. God. That was...amzing. Nothing short of amazing. It's really heartbreaking to know that one can die for something as uncontrollable as love. A lot of people think that Christians hate homosexuals. I'm a Christian, and I don't hate gay people. See!? I'm living proof that is IS possible!!

This fic made me sad for the Elric's grim fate, and angry at the villagers. This was very well-written, everyone (especially Ed) was in-character, and I think you have a real talent for writing. Keep up the good work, and I will check often for new fics in the future.

Purrs,
Frenchie-chan

Oh my gosh
That had to be the saddest story I have ever read in my life
I cried... really.
Im still crying.
But anyway... VERY well written, and I loved everything about it.

='[ so sad..

aww that was just so sad!! how could u write a story like that!! but i loved it so thx for writing it! it was really good! xD

aww that was so sad! but good, it was very good! well done.