AWW...SO SWEET!

This is just... amazing.

Aw. That was really cute. I loved it. ^_^

Aw! Yeah, I'm a sucker for some Tobias/Rachel, myself. This was really cute; I loved it. I especially liked the part where she talked about the description of Xena, then referenced Legally Blonde, and said she's neither one. She's just Rachel. That was not only very in-character, but it was a great thought in itself. I could totally see Applegate making Rachel say something to the effect of "don't try to pigeon-hole me. I'm not Xena and I'm not the Legally Blonde girl; I'm RACHEL!"

Anyways, this was great. Well-written, great thoughts, everyone in-character... it was just great. :)

Very good! I like it!

Aww, so sweet!

Wow...okay, that was beautiful. That actually sounded like something that might happen between Rachel and Tobias in the books. You have them pinned perfectly. I absolutely LOVE R/T and this is probably the best R/T story I've read. Are you going to write any other stories like this? Thanks for posting this on here - it's perfect.

Oh,my.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.touching story.Sniff.

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Wow..that was...Wow...I've never read a fanfiction story better than that. That was amazing...Wow...Wow...

Hey, you write a really good, very human Rachel. Good job. Also, the title is very witty and unique, and this is a darn clever simile: "He saw my deepest secrets, as if he were a yeerk flipping through the pages of my brain."