I tried to predict this one in the beginning, haha. Thanks for sharing!

Ha! I loved that! You had me so scared with "the gap" that I thought they were going to break up! But as soon as I read, "I felt the movement of her abdomen, but it wasn’t only her breath" I knew what was going on and let out a happy squee. lol

This was awesome, an excellent LLV fic. Good job!

VegasGoddess

Oh that was so sweet! At first i thought "the gap" was a bad thing till i read where her abdomen moved. ) Great job!

What a wonderful story! OMG, I so did not see the end coming. I had to go back and look for clues and they are there but so subtle. I like happy geeks, so thank you for putting a smile on my face! Great job!

OMG! I so thought they were going to break up! You tricked me!

Not fair!

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haha i loved the unexpected ending. i was totally preparing myself for angst and then i got even better! awesome job.

I loved it! The ending was so unexpected, good job!

Great, so sweet I was waiting for you to write more and I will be waiting for the next Brilliant! funny and sweet I love it.

Nice 'twist'. Thought it was going to be angst. Loved that it wasn't. Laughed a lot with "suitcase with clothes for her and the gap, um… I mean"

Brilliant x

Very good buildup. For something so short, I didn't see what eventually happened coming and yet, when it did, it put everything else into context. Good job. :)

The story was really great. I thought that the gap was Grissom and Sara growing farther apart in their relationship. Really great story again.

sweet and so cute!

That was so cute-what a teaser! I had to read it all the

way to "my water just broke" to realize it was not an

angsty post-LLV! Thanks!