lol it got good about half way. but thats because im a yaoi fan and having read that you paired up Caboose and Donut. -grins and gives two thumbs up-

Awwwwwwwwwww this is adorable! This is the cutest RvB fic I've seen. In the top ten list of cutest fic in any fandom.

Highly amusing, in character, and indeed a very bad day for Donut, this fic was pretty good to read because of the following: the itemized parts of a bad day, Donut's classic behavior, Sheila's ever hilarious indiscriminate fire, the large implications and reveal of things that an M rated game would never have, the romance scenes, and of course the happy ending.

In short, it was a very nice fic.

adorable

rofl Loved Caboose in this!

Day might've been a collective pile of shit, but with that kind of reward at the end, it doesn't really matter, now does it.

You are my fucking hero.

Shiver and gasp. Shiver and Gasp

i cried again

ur stories hav that affect on me for some reason

lol

XD At least his day wasn't completely bad. Hilarious one-shot.