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ElvenMermaid
2009-08-31 . chapter 2
Ooh, I luffs this!! Normally I just read SasuSaku, but this one's good. :) Please hurry and update!! :)
Pistolas
2009-03-09 . chapter 2
Wow, this just blew me away.

At first I was a bit skeptical about it since mermaids and ninjas where never thought before this, but your writing and characters are so good and the plot is being carried so well for a beginning I just fell in love with this, its just like reading a Naruto movie.

*fav.*
Comfort Food
2007-12-16 . chapter 2
AH! Cliffhanger! I really like this, can't wait for the next chapter! =D
Yume Dust
2007-11-30 . chapter 2
Your fighting scenes are very good, and I like your writing style. It was simple yet sophisticated, my favorite type of writing! I hope you continue, it's quite interesting. And the fluff here was really cute, even if it wasn't much yet. I liked how you portrayed Ino without any traces of OOCness, since some people often misunderstand her stubborn personality, doesn't mean she is like that. I liked how you portrayed Shikamaru yourself, and not that lazy ** that he usually was. Again, some people misunderstand him as nothing more than a lazy person, but you made sure to keep their character in tact. It's a wonderful piece you have, and I hope you continue it.

*Yume
Shortey
2007-09-21 . chapter 2
Pretty please, update as fast as possible! Such a unique and different fic from the shinobi stories I've read. Quite refreshing and interesting. I never thought of mermaids existing in the world of Naruto! Great story and great portrayal of the characters. Great job!
fruitpunch123451
2007-09-03 . chapter 2
please please please please update soon now i just have to read the rest in the end does takuya (i think thats how you spell it) tell her that its a curse or something update soon
Miss Melanie Magick
2007-08-17 . chapter 2
Wow...I'd really like to read more of this! ^^ Please update soon!
-Minelle
AniMeViEtGrl
2007-08-02 . chapter 2
Oh wow! your writing style is AMAZING! You got me hooked already! =] Update when you can!
patricia
2007-07-08 . chapter 2
please write the next story already please!
nazzy and jerkez
2007-07-06 . chapter 2
Yay, you updated! THANK GOD! I've been waiting quite a long time, you know.
And, voilá, Ino's a mermaid. Poor Shika-chan, what's he gonna do?
Can't wait!
love /nazaliasan
Coco-Minu
2007-06-29 . chapter 2
This was brilliant. It has only just started but I'm already wowed. Good job!
Cheez plz
2007-06-27 . chapter 2
great story, kind of getting a bit weird though, anyways i love it, one of the best stories i ever read too
Aralka
2007-06-27 . chapter 2
Sorry for such late review XD;
Anyway, great chapter, loved it! So nice to see Shika so worried about Ino.
Keep up teh awesome work!
Crystal Koneko
2007-06-24 . chapter 2
I can't wait for more! You've really pulled this off nicely!
Random Mongoose
2007-06-21 . chapter 2
Wow! That was even better than I anticipated! I am absolutely in love with this story; there's nothing like mythical creatures mixed with Shika/Ino infatuation. Can't wait for the next chappy! You're doing awesome!
R.M.
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