 AB 2009-10-14 . chapter 3 For us 15 year olds who are taking AP Calc next year, take pity, please. I still have IB HIgher Level Multivariable Calculus With Statistics to agonize over senior year. |
 AB 2009-10-14 . chapter 2 Sometimes, you overestimate your readers. Well written, but I completely missed the point. |
 AB 2009-10-14 . chapter 1 Fascinating. |
 jodiebaby 2008-12-27 . chapter 3i really enjoy reading your work. it's unlike the other LV/HG that i've seen. it's curious that you've chose joan of arc as your metaphoric outlet. |
 Black-Rose23 2007-02-06 . chapter 1I like this one. It's very morbid and very good. |
 hpfanf 2007-02-03 . chapter 1I don't really like this. I don't know if you're a strong writer or not but I certainly think you should post a complete story. I liked the overall tone of your 'drabbles' but I didn't understand anything about the story...if there was one. I would encourage you to write a fic and stop with these drabbles. Perhaps the drabbles are more suitable with the LJ group, maybe not FF. If you don't want to write huge stories (with 10+ chapters) you can always do stand alones or one-shots. |
 Kevyn 2007-02-02 . chapter 1I found te premise quite interesting. I am intrigued that you thought to put Hermione-Voldemort into the story of Joan of Arc. I am painfully aware of how unhelpful this is, but I really liked this piece & unfortunately have no criticisms, instructive or otherwise. I dearly wish I had, but...maybe another day, another drabble... |
 Laurie 2007-01-27 . chapter 1 interesting parallels... |
 HollieGolightly 2007-01-27 . chapter 1Hi! I really enjoyed that. It is rare in my experience to find peice like this, a poem that makes you think rather than stereotypical fanfictions. I thought it was very well written, creative and thought provoking. keep writing,
xo |
 Gueneviere 2007-01-26 . chapter 1This was fantastic but I didn't quite get WHY she turned to the 'dark'. So, the light was dangerously dark, but why turn into something even more (or, if you want, equivalently) evil? If you realise all they were doing was using her to kill, then why continue doing the same for the other side? Why don't just leave? Ah well, anyways, loved it. |