wow

normally i'm a bit wary of really REALLY au's but this is absolutly f-ing brilliant.

please update this - don't leave it for dead!

Em x

(btw, your name is REALLY cool :P)

I.. I'm completely speechless. (In the good way, of course.)
This is amazing. Just... wow. I adore every bit of this, as much as I possibly can.
The way you characterize Mark is perfect, I love it. Roger is wonderful!
Also... I have a small question. Is Joanne ever going to show up? (I sincerely hope so.)
And the cliffhanger! GAH!
I'm sorry I couldn't write a longer review. I will next time though, so please update soon! (Keep up the glorious work!)

Three words for you: write more, please!

oh my gosh! Roger got Marky to open up and talk about himself and confess stuff and be COMFORTABLE around him! (only for a few minutes, but still!) yay! I'm glad they're becoming friends, and it's awesome learning more about both of them (their thoughts, hopes, past, etc). Oh, and I love that Angel played the harp on the street for money in Viyage! and told the future (dundundun...it sounded like Roger was the one from Aveb who delivers Viyage!! I'm so excited for the continuing plot of this story! ...unless it doesn't continue...you said you were done w/ this fandom...that's right. DAMN! now I'll never find out what happens!!) :'(

Great chapter. I loved it very much. Keep up the good work.

ooh. awesomeness.

Ou... it gets interesting! (Not that it hasn't been already!) Hopefully, you'll write more and post more soon!
Awesome job
Keep writing!

oh lol i like this story very much =) update soon

Very nice chapter! Will we hear more about Maureen? I hope so. Well, well, well, Roger wants Mark to bathe him, how will Mark react? Next chapter, soon, please! That way I'll have something to do other than eat oreos. Plus I just want to know what happens next! Update soon!
**Courtney

i was spectical to read this at first, just because of the description seemed to mislead. but, once i actually read it, i like this a lot. i'm sorry i didnt read sooner.
please update soon.

Good story so far. I've enjoyed it.

Aw, Mark, poor Mark. At least Roger is trying to make him feel better. I love it! Nice chapter, keep up the good work. Update soon!
**Courtney

Aw... how adorable! That was so cute! Poor Mark...
Awesome job! I love this story!
Keep writing!

aw! the end of this chapter is so sweet!! it does kind of bother me how servile Mark is, but I'm sure Roger and Collins and Angel and April will get that out of him and get him more relaxed. ooh, and is the next chapter going to be Mark and Roger hanging out? ooh, I'm so excited!! hehe. honestly, though, this is a really good chapter, because it really shows what Mark and Roger are like together right now, and what Mark expects from any master (we kind of already knew what Roger expects from his personal slaves), and how Roger isn't like that. so yeah, EXCELLENT chapter! (I felt so bad for Mark the whole time...hope that was what you were going for...hehe)

aw! it's cute, but weak!mark is a wee bit strange for me. part of me is going 'AWW!' and part of me is saying 'damn, he needs to grow a pair.' XD i do like it, though.