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LizTheBookNerd 8/10/10 . chapter 1
aw :)
Fugundus 7/13/10 . chapter 1
Aww, depressing and happy all in one. I liked it.
Gabriel Wolfe 7/8/09 . chapter 1
I am so confused, yo...
Non-member 6/3/09 . chapter 1
I thought it was so sweet that you had Max kill herself for Fang! Yay! Great story!
Victoria Alatamir Wan 5/4/09 . chapter 1
Awesome! That's pretty much all I have to say. :)

V.
ThatHasARingToItDontYaThink 2/13/09 . chapter 1
Aw and here I thought I'd be in tears *wipez tears away* The ending was do not what i expected cuz it cheered me up. Tho Max did lyk a b@#* in da beginning but I'm glad their together forever now yea! yay!
phoenixflyinghigh 7/5/08 . chapter 1
you should write about their "life" in heaven

*wiggles eyebrows*
TheSmartieTubes 3/22/08 . chapter 1
god i'm crying.aww.its ded sad.then happy

happy easter and write more cuz your good at it

love lizz...x
Frannie-pants 2/19/08 . chapter 1
sad, but the ending was cute :D
Loved1 12/31/07 . chapter 1
That was sweet. but then again it reminded me of this one disgusting thing on I HATE IT! sry. it's just... gross. if you want to know what it is, PM me.

LOved1
disneydork 11/9/07 . chapter 1
Here I am, crying in the middle of BUSINESS CLASS! Re-reading this incredibly sad, depressing, AMAZING story. Kind of ironic that I'm supposed to be working on a Romeo and Juliet brochure :P

You really are an amazing writer.

PLEASE write more soon!

a now very embarrased disney
fullmetalvampire747 11/8/07 . chapter 1
wow. that blew me away.

2 things:

1. u should totally make a species and the pecies name is we.

2. does December 11 actually have any relevance in ur life?

Again, awesome story. Luv it.

-Sam
Alex 10/12/07 . chapter 1
AW! I like so totally cried. seriously I'm bawling right now. I loved it you are such a good writer!
This Sayuri-Sama 8/19/07 . chapter 1
OMG! I loved it! It was so sad! But then It was wonderful! But Now that their dead what will happen? You said we could give suggestions so here's mine!

I say you continue this story and have the after math where the flock is all there and they are depressed. then there could be a seperation. Or mabye they could stick together and love on but have happy endings as well. Or they could live on, have to save the world and then have happy endings. Or Angel and Gazzy could die and leave Iggy and Nudge to deal with sorrow, then Iggy and Nudge would find a happy ending! OMG there are so many possabilities! But just a fair warning I plan to do a story where Angel and Gazzy are the only ones left after the flock dies and they end up having new freinds and also Angel goes to highschool and finds a happily ever after! So stay away from anything like that please, I'd like to keep that Idea for my own. Or you can use some parts of it if you like just please give me credit for that idea, the others are yours - GOD bless you! And I'll bew checking to see if you update, if you don't use my ideas I'm fine with it so don't feel like you HAVE to use any of them, I'm just making that clear! :D
disneydork 8/11/07 . chapter 1
NO!
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