Wow...ever since I read Wee!Chester fics. I don't like Sam(my) :D...so I really liked your story but could you please write a sequel? Cause I'd liked to read about Johns reaction when he comes home and one of his sons is dead - shot by the other one...

this one is just morbid and this does happen in real life.

I do not like this story but i did read quequeing theory and that was more lighthearted !

Holy crap, Sam unknowingly killed Dean O_O

Oh my god... this was amazing 3

This is one of those stories that just makes your stomach drop and your heart seize up. It's terrifying in a way you rarely see in fan fiction because it's just so real. Hundreds of children die every year from accidental shootings and it makes your blood run cold reading this because you can just see this scene playing out for real in homes all across the country. So sad but Great story! I know it's been said, but I would love to see a sequel to this to see John's reaction and the long term effects of this tragic accident.

i know this is from like 3 years ago and a lot of other people have said so, but i really wish you could turn this into a two-shot...i lvoe your writng btw :)

! Omg that is so hilarious. It kinda reminds me of mystery spot in a wierd way. LOL

AWW! poor sammy poor dean other then that pretty good

:'(..poor Sammy, and Dean of course...

no! good story, but - just - no! dean!

aw! That's cute! :)

and depressing.

but mostly cute. :)

I love mini Sam:)

he's so naive:)

great work

OMG! This was horribly, horribly sad. Poor Sammy :-( You should totally write a sequel to this that explores how Sam and John both handled Dean's death. It would be interesting to see if John blames Sam, even though he was a little boy and really didn't know any better, and if he somehow makes Sam feel guilty. How will Dean's death affect Sam as a hunter and son?

P.S You should totally consider this. I think a lot of people would agree with me :-)

Sylvia

Wow, I am majorly creeped out now. That was extremely disturbing! In a good way, though, if that's possible! Great story.

he he he

lol this is great

omg! horrible i dont have words! i had totally not really expected that. no, well, sort of, but arg. good story, talk about guts to write . Was hoping for sam dead, but hey can imagine sam upset at end, even if he did understand. wow, oh wow. thanks for the fic, always great to see a person being adventurous.