this is suspensful. you need to continue this. its really good. like the rest of how he feels. please!

its not weird!its great are you going to do a sequel or something?i really like BOTH stories but i prefer this one!

great job update

keep going.

lucas lover

interesting

(IBTB)

Nice!i liked it and it was kinda funny also cause you didn't put like a happy ending just aweird but good ending! you should write more!