YAY

Oh, my.

Even Momo?

:(

As macabre as all of that was, it was touching. I love your writing style.

whoa. angst. sadness. in a good "i gotta read it again" way. it almost made me cry. good job.

*sniffle* I CRIED. That's so sad. I can't believe Toph Katara and Iroh died. They're three of the people I would expect to make it. I loved the emotion. So real, so SAD!! *runs off crying* This was really good.

I love this! It's so...sad...
Zutara! Yay!

This was simply beautiful.
Angsty, but brilliant. I love the hint of Zutara by the way. That last line from Sokka about Katara, was amazing.

Snif that was awsome Sniff sniff so cool but deperassing


Ranting writer

Wow, I usually hate apocalyptic, everyone-dies type fics, but this was really well done.

This made me cry.

I love Iroh.

:C

This is an amazing story. I really think that you shouldn't continue because there weren't any loose ends and it seemed pretty straightforward. So kudos to you on this wonderful story.

Well, how much continuing can you do with all the girls dead?
But, this was really really good. I got that feeling.
The constriction in your chest when you read something sad?

Yep, good... Nice job. :]

Oh.

My.

God.

That was amazing. There's nothing else that I can say about it. Simply amazing. Every word seemed to come alive. It's writers like you that set the precedent for the rest of us. Kudos, my friend, kudos...

Loved it. Thanks for the great read.

.:Ultra-Geek:.

Interesting, in a kind of Shakespearean tragedy third act kind of way. Perhaps just the teeniest bit overdone around the middle, when Sokka assesses Zuko and Azula. Perhaps it's a case of "show, don't tell", which you obviously couldn't do on a one-shot.

Anyway, even though it was nice, I don't really think you should take this any farther. After the Fire Nation's broken and half the main cast is killed, there's not really any loose ends to tie up, and so continuing would feel artificial. Do a prequel, if you absolutely have to, and tell the story backwards, but it's even better if you leave things as they are.

That was probably the saddest thing I have ever read. I really hope that doesn't accually happen. Really well-written, though.

Ok well there is only one thing to be said about this piece and that is WOW. Amazing job.