Oh... so sad...

sniffle

But beautiful anyway,

Girlblue

Oh my Gosh! That was so sweet/sad. Poor Kel!

I didn't think yuki was to strong. She had to. I see her as keeping her emotions checked so she can be strong for both her husband and kKl, then, later she would cry (hmm?). Oh, and I really liked the Goddess telling her to be strong. Beautiful.

Very nice but very sad story. I liked it. I liked the first chapter better then the second but they were both very well done! Good work.

:) Great story- I absolutely loved it!

*sniff* I thought It was a sweet story and it portrayed the characters of Kel and Dom perfectly! Although I thought that Kel would show more emotion when Dom died.

leave it like this. it is to perfect to spoil with anything else.

Keep it going.

Maybe do something about the Chamber and Dom.

Or the goddess. NOT ROMANTICALLY!

Like telling her to continue.

Awh, i nearly cried! It was really good though, please write more, it would be good to see how Kel copes...

Um there was definitely a few tears on my part.

That was beautifully well written. I would have loved to see a tiny bit more though! So sad ;_;