 WalkerTRngr 2008-03-28 . chapter 1Go bears!! That was really cute :) |
 Quill-32 2007-10-20 . chapter 1Absolutely adorable! |
 GeekLoveFan 2007-02-02 . chapter 1A) That was too cute.
B) Kiss my **. Go Colts! (Everyone in TN is pulling for the Colts because we regard Peyton Manning as being just below God in the hierarchy of things). In fact, most people in the good ol' Volunteer state cheer for the Colts over the Titans any day! |
 lisab1986 2007-01-31 . chapter 1Aww, too cute! I loved Sara being a bigger fan than she let on - that's totally something I'd do! Great work! |
 Maisy13 2007-01-31 . chapter 1That was really cute. I did find one little typo, but I figured it out. Here it is...
"As his finds found the waistband to her jeans, Sara sat up abruptly"
Either finds, should be hands, or his, should be he, and the finds or found should be deleted.
This is off topic of this story, but do you plan on finishing you Ice, Ice Baby story? I've actually been waiting on that one to be updated.
Have a great day. |
 MusicSpaz 2007-01-30 . chapter 1Ha, I almost feel bad for liking this, because I'm a loyal Colts fan.
Oh, the cuteness. I really hope that GSR thoughts don't distract me, now, come Sunday... |
 xyber116 2007-01-29 . chapter 1Funny. But I think Sara might be a 49ers fan though since she's from the bay area. |
 odeepblue 2007-01-29 . chapter 1lol... totally adorable! |
 sandie 2007-01-29 . chapter 1 HI SCULLY!!I AM FROM THE CHICAGO AREA AND I AM VERY PROUD CHICAGOAN, I SAY WITH G&S : GO BEARS! WRITE BACK IF YOU WANT OR MAYBE AFTER THIS E-MAIL U MAY NOT! SO THANKS, LOVE THE STORY!! |
 StarlaMarie 2007-01-28 . chapter 1Thank you for the mental of Gris in his **-fabulous jeans! *hehe* |
 ET05 2007-01-28 . chapter 1There's nothing like a good bit of fluff to brighten your day :)
Although I suspect Grissom would disagree with me, I think Sara admitting at the end that she does actually want to watch the game is brilliant! Just the kind of sweet little moment I can really imagine! |
 L'anana 2007-01-28 . chapter 1I have only one thing to say: Peyton Manning sucks! That is all. |
 djkittycat 2007-01-28 . chapter 1This was very cute.
Though, it's extremely unlikely that Grissom would have eaten salsa regularly as a child, given that it was not really popular in the united states at that time, and he's not Chicano.
I must say, I'm rooting for the bears too, because I'm from Baltimore ;). |
 taramis 2007-01-28 . chapter 1Brilliant! I totally believe Grissom would be a football fan (but I think baseball would be his first love). Heh. Lovely, lovely snapshot of GSR! |
 AngelApple70x7 2007-01-28 . chapter 1Cute Story.
GO BEARS! |