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WalkerTRngr
2008-03-28 . chapter 1
Go bears!! That was really cute :)
Quill-32
2007-10-20 . chapter 1
Absolutely adorable!
GeekLoveFan
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
A) That was too cute.
B) Kiss my **. Go Colts! (Everyone in TN is pulling for the Colts because we regard Peyton Manning as being just below God in the hierarchy of things). In fact, most people in the good ol' Volunteer state cheer for the Colts over the Titans any day!
lisab1986
2007-01-31 . chapter 1
Aww, too cute! I loved Sara being a bigger fan than she let on - that's totally something I'd do! Great work!
Maisy13
2007-01-31 . chapter 1
That was really cute. I did find one little typo, but I figured it out. Here it is...

"As his finds found the waistband to her jeans, Sara sat up abruptly"

Either finds, should be hands, or his, should be he, and the finds or found should be deleted.

This is off topic of this story, but do you plan on finishing you Ice, Ice Baby story? I've actually been waiting on that one to be updated.

Have a great day.
MusicSpaz
2007-01-30 . chapter 1
Ha, I almost feel bad for liking this, because I'm a loyal Colts fan.

Oh, the cuteness. I really hope that GSR thoughts don't distract me, now, come Sunday...
xyber116
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
Funny. But I think Sara might be a 49ers fan though since she's from the bay area.
odeepblue
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
lol... totally adorable!
sandie
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
HI SCULLY!!I AM FROM THE CHICAGO AREA AND I AM VERY PROUD CHICAGOAN, I SAY WITH G&S : GO BEARS! WRITE BACK IF YOU WANT OR MAYBE AFTER THIS E-MAIL U MAY NOT! SO THANKS, LOVE THE STORY!!
StarlaMarie
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
Thank you for the mental of Gris in his **-fabulous jeans! *hehe*
ET05
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
There's nothing like a good bit of fluff to brighten your day :)

Although I suspect Grissom would disagree with me, I think Sara admitting at the end that she does actually want to watch the game is brilliant! Just the kind of sweet little moment I can really imagine!
L'anana
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
I have only one thing to say: Peyton Manning sucks! That is all.
djkittycat
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
This was very cute.

Though, it's extremely unlikely that Grissom would have eaten salsa regularly as a child, given that it was not really popular in the united states at that time, and he's not Chicano.

I must say, I'm rooting for the bears too, because I'm from Baltimore ;).
taramis
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
Brilliant! I totally believe Grissom would be a football fan (but I think baseball would be his first love). Heh. Lovely, lovely snapshot of GSR!
AngelApple70x7
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
Cute Story.
GO BEARS!
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