*cry cry* thats so sad I don't want Naruto to die! great job!

so sweet and sad ...

though i love the poem on the grave stone - very pretty

So sad! *cries* A very well written one-shot.

You know...it has been a really really long time since I read a fanfic that made me cry. And I mean really cry not the kind when a person feels sad and then they state in the reveiw that it made them cry...even though that is a lie. This was really well done. The poem. The words. You captured emotions perfectly. I write alot and people tell me I make them cry and it always has a tremendous impact on my life when I hear it. I just want you to know that I was considering giving up on a few of my stories but, I read this and I just was completley inspired. And I am being totally honest. I think you are a fantastic writer and you should write much more. I also think you should read my Naruto fic. It is called, "Finding Heaven." It is kinda sad kinda happy. But it is a Naruto Sasuke slash. I don't know if you are into that but, if you are you should check it out. Once again thank you for writing this. It has really touched my heart.

-Hero out

so dramatic and nice!

Good! Good! GOOD! Short and angsty, very well written. Nice poem at the end. Only complaint: it's DEBT not DEPT.

But very well written!