 starchica 2007-01-28 . chapter 1Well, I'm definitely interested in this story. It's a novel idea, and I can't wait to see how this turns out. I have so many unanswered questions, and I love that. I'm glad that you didn't explain everything that's going on in an Author's Note at the beginning, and are instead using your writing to inform the reader about what has happened in the last three years. I'm sure that my questions will be gradually answered in the upcoming chapters.
As for the original Chosen, I don't know what to think. I want them to be alive, and I'm hoping that the two children in the factory were Tai and either Sora or Mimi. But then again, you did say that T.K. is dead, and I personally think that that's the more logical consequence of failing to defeat the Dark Masters. The Dark Masters are ruthless, and wouldn't spare anyone out of pity. Well, either way, I'll look forward to your next update. |