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Dhevz
2009-12-01 . chapter 1
Lol! this fanfic was funny! But bad athrun! XD
Dragonscall
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
haha! Congrats for being able to pull off the only dialogue set up. It was great. I swear, my smile just kept getting bigger and bigger the further I went.
Kkornelia
2009-05-18 . chapter 1
funny.
I applaud you for coming up with a fun and clear story entirely out of dialogue.
Once, I almost drowned in a pool of three feet. So I can relate to Athrun. And no, I wasn't drunk then. so I feel more pathetic and more of an idiot then he does in this fiction. :)

~Kkornelia
miella allstar
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
funny
shiloah18
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
*grins* Athrun's in for it this time.. *giggLes*

nyWeiZ, baka no Dearka.. >_< spiking bLoOdy heLL of everything! hmm.. now, I just have to figure out who were the guyz who saw stuFf which were for Athrun's eyes onLy.. *sighs* guesS he wanted to share.. *shrugs* suteki deshou one-shot! jaa ne! ;3
xyzbackwards
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
That was funny. xD. It's awesome. Poor Athrun...
yay
2007-02-15 . chapter 1
Omg yay ur back!! I'm so happy! Oh and this was funny as all hell, and good! It reminds me of my friends and some of the stupid ** that we do sometimes to tease each other.
Muffinizer
2007-02-09 . chapter 1
Ooh now what a surprise! I had no idea whom was whom so I was liek "Is that Kira in the incident or Athrun? Poor guy." Oh God, Athrun. He really is gonna take a beating from Cagalli, hmm?

Kira, that no good friend! XD

-Muffinizer, paku
Story Weaver1
2007-02-04 . chapter 1
LMAO! A year and you still are a very funny author. Dearka spiked everything, that just cracks me up.
StarryRavenFire
2007-01-31 . chapter 1
Oh man, this story made me laugh at the end. It was so funny! I can't wait for you to continue with TIH and The Dearka x Milli one!! :) Mucho hugs and I'll continue to be your fan no matter what! :)
skywolf666
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
For a second ihad no idea what was going on, but it still was hilarious! You ought to write a sequel, i wonder how Athrun ends up... lmao

Sky
Ally-Kat722
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
Do you have any idea how excited I was to see an update from you, yuugiri? I freaking LOVE you! Yes, I still go back and reread TIH every so often. And this was just up to your normal standard. My god, I could hardly BREATHE at the end of it! *rolls on the floor laughing some more*

Now, I must say my favorite part was the part about Dearka spiking everything, but I do love how you have to wait until the end to figure out exactly who each person is. When I went back and looked at it again, I saw the moments where you'd go "Oh yeah, that's TOTALLY Cagalli" that I missed the first time. ^^ But it was awesome. Totally made my evening, and will probably continue to make any day I read it brighter, just for the pure hilarity of it all.

So, yeah, in shorter words... I LOVE you, and it is AMAZING! *sings* Fantastic work, and I can't wait to read more by you!

Lots of
DarkFusion
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
(pauses after laughing ** off)
Excellent one shot as always! Boy, I wouldn't want to be in Dearka's shoes after Cagalli's finished with Athrun (though I wonder which of the two will take revenge on him for spiking the drinks first). Anyway, welcome back yuugiri-san, and it's great to see you back. I eagerly await your next chapter of TIS, hope it arrives soon.

DF: Ahem! now without further adue, we must throw a welcome back party! Who's with me?!?!?

(huge cheers from fans of yuugiri's fics)
Amafurase
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
LOL! haha, nice.
So happy to see you back :D
Rihaku
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
I had read your other stories and enjoyed them very much. Glad to see you're back! I hope it's not just a temporary resurgence.

I don't think Kira would use three "reallys," though. It doesn't seem natural to someone as mild as him. And "After she did her job" - I've never heard of that phrase before. Though it's easy to deduce what it means it just struck me as strange. Overall, though, the all-dialogue story was excellent. It's rare that we see something as inventive in this fandom (sadly enough -_-).
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