Wow. lol... that's all I can say, really. I think yor story was excellent - really witty. Huh. It's a shame I don't know what exactly this ("Dagon" ??) series is all about.

You wrote a gut buster here. Especiall that bit with the little mermaid? So that's what happens to non believers.

I pity Frank, he can't have tasted very good.

You should do other lovecraft parodies.

My favorite part was where Wanda came in dressed in sea life. Lucky ** squid.

Ta

Master of teh Boot

Oh... I'm your first reviewer. Do I get some fish food or something?

First of all... YOU FREAKIN' ROCK! This is the funniest thing I've read in days! I'd have to rank TSOI as one of my top fav HPL stories, and your parody cracked me up! I love how instead of HP's tortured intellectuals, you have an complete pervert who, what he shares the usual lot's utter denseness, doesn't seemed peterbed by what he does figure out in the least.

The images in the church were quite amusing as well. And all the ocean-related metaphors.

And Wanda... Is that a sly Monty Python reference? You devil!

Ciao!

-SN