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Reviews For: Come Back to Me

KatLilly86
2007-02-28
ch 1,
abuseaw... sad!
Dark Angel's Blue Fire
2007-01-30
ch 1,
abusebittersweet but so good it was brilliant!
Liz Wilson
2007-01-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey no fair!
That wasn't very nice!
Everything was going along just fine and dandy until those last 11 lines. Those 11 lines completely changes the whole story. So quickly it changed from a happy fluffy piece to a jaw dropping OMG thats so sad piece.
No Fair!

But really well done. Good work

Liz
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