*snickers* They were both so wonderfully in character it was adorable!

Aww those last few lines made me giggle. Cheeky Allan and shy Will just makes my day!

I love this!

I love Will/Allan. :)

I love this pairing _

You can toally picture them, great start I want to see how this goes on!

This is so great. I love the way it's so slashy with absolutely nothing graphic - using the devious power of your readers' imaginations to write their own fics! It's very clever: delicately subtle yet brick-to-the-face overt at the same time.

Love Allan's cheekiness. LOVE Will's adorably cute embarassment and discomfort. It's truly brilliant. ;D

Love, Pig :D

this is really good.

This is a sweet little story, I love the way you have captured their humour. You should write more.

I've added you to my fav authors list, and look forward to your future work.