Please write more this seemes like a promising story to read

Great job as usual, Beeria! :D

I absolutely love this story and believe it to be one of your best! Poor Zack being kidnapped and poor Cloud for being forced to marry Princess Tifa. Update soon.

WHAT THE?! aw... Princey is going to be married to another Princess... i hate Rufus... hehehe... weLL, great chapter!! hope to read the rest soon!! hehe...

AWW! that was so cute!! hehehe...

aw, too bad for me... i won't get any cookie... dunno anything fromthe game... hehehe... weLL, very cute!

aaw... so cute!! hehehe... Aerith reaLLy is very speciaL... hehehe...

whoa!! nice proLogue!! very interesting!! hehe... i can't wait to read the next chapters!

Well, considering I just read the update for "An Angel's Bodyguard"...deja vu. >

A good and amusing start to a story with a lot of potential storylines to follow up on. Well done, I'll be following this. ^_-

Great Can't wait for the next chappys. Reali brill story so far.
Like I said I can't wait for more

You’re my favorite Cloud and Aerith writer so you have to update regularly and allow me to get my fix!

*glomp* YOU'RE ALIVE!
So, now that that's out of the way... xD
This is such a cute chappy! I could imagine the end of the chapter happening, although I'm not sure if I caught all of the lines from the game. ^_^
Update soon!

This is a really cute story...I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next

You know, this story idea was already taken? >_>

hey, i love your story, please please please update soon!