Please UPDATE

please update.

Well D you got me hooked so hopefully it doesn't take too long to update.
You also got me a little interested in Haibaine so I'll have to check it out sometime.
Read ya Later.

The Next day, on the trial [trail] to the Toga's Temple;

its a good chapter.

personally, i would have liked ti fleshed out a bit more, but thats me. hope this means you are going to be putting out more stuff more often.

That was cute little scene with Rei and Shinji.
They are close to their destiny but is it something that they can handle or something that could possibly tear them apart?

this chapter needs to be broken up into paragraphs. somehow that failed to code correctly.

Well you already hooked me so good work there.
I'm wondering what fate is prepairing for the young ex-pilots.

I know I'm already confused but hey It's not really gonna stop me from reading.
Who knows this may get me interested in haibain.
Read ya later.