 israeli-american 2007-11-10 . chapter 1Nice...I've always wondered why Siri would choose a Padawan like Ferus-but your theory really makes sense, it;s kind of psychological...
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 Kelev 2007-02-12 . chapter 1I love it! |
 Ethiriel 2007-02-10 . chapter 1That was really awesome. Your really good at making Siri stay in Character. I think she's usually a bit more laid back though... but I'm judging more from the Last of the Jedi series. You should make it into a series or something. Please?! |
 Elda Aranel 2007-02-10 . chapter 1i like the idea of this story. i hope u continue it. SO far, the language/spelling/etc is good. There's plenty of details. keep it up! |
 Calico23 2007-02-06 . chapter 1i cant say that i know Siri as well as the other star war characters, but i believe that you've captured her personalities quite well. i love how you portrayed yoda and adi too. great story! maybe you should consider following it with a sequel. |