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| keepix 2007-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseDespite some mistakes (but here I can't really say smthg coz I'm not english so I do make mistakes héhé...) it's very cool! I read it with pleasure and "I love the way" you describe those casual moments, they almost become poetic... Great ^^ |
| lovecatsara4eva 2007-05-04 ch 5, | abuseThats great! You are really talented! The way you describe thing makes me wish I was there! Keep updating! Kat |
| gigi2690 2007-03-02 ch 5, | abuseVery sweet. I love how you catch such insignificant moments and transform them. Ideas...hmm... how about Sara angry...she is incredible when she is that passionate. Gigi |
| danya 2007-02-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat job on these fics. I love that you have not said who the narrator is, leaving it open for whoever we want. Looking forward to your next chapter. |
| chauncey 2007-02-09 ch 5, anon. | abusethis is very good |
| Dr. Addison Montgomery 2007-02-09 ch 5, | abuseAww great chapter! Liked it a lot! Update soon! Vikki x |
| Dr. Addison Montgomery 2007-02-02 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! Love it! :D Update soon! Vikki x |
| Chione of the Nile 2007-02-01 ch 4, | abuseI really want to know who this is. Update soon please! ~Chione~ |
| Dr. Addison Montgomery 2007-01-31 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter! Still hanging onto the hope that it's Sandle hehe! Write more soon! Vikki x |
| -OCNCISD- 2007-01-29 ch 2, | abuseIt's brilliant honeyy. Don't listen to the evil PurplePopple person. lol i'm talking to you as well now! :P lol I love it, don't be an evil person, PurplePopple :o that stuff was unbelievably mean, i've seen much worse puntuation etc. OMG Vicki you random! :P lol hehe a paper bag! :P trust you blondie/shortie :D love it, ud soon honey, Abi x |
| csialltheway 2007-01-28 ch 2, | abuseI LIKE IT ALLOT... |
| amanda 2007-01-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseso awesome!More chapters.More,more,more! |
| CSI Dork 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHey! I like this it's really cool. Can imagine it from a couple of characters points of view because it's very well written in a way that leaves it up to interpretation. I don't know if that was your intention but I like it all the same! LOL keep up the good work xx PS - I agree that it's quite random that you wrote it on the back of a till roll at work, did you get any work done in between? LOL |
| PurplePopple 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI wouldn't have posted this as a single chapter. I would have waited until I had more becaue the mistakes, of which there are a number, are more obvious in a short piece. Numbers should be spelled out when they are under a hundred. There are missing apostrophes in contractions. There is random capitalization. I don't understand the use of spec. The punctuation for the dialog is done incorrectly. Honestly, this needs a good beta reader and to follow the basic writing rules. Until then, well, this isn't that readable and not that enjoyable. |
| Vikki 2007-01-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseOoh yay two chapters in one night! Can't wait to read more! Vikki x |