#20 was my absolute fav! Along with #39 and #37. I got a kick out of those!

Tres

oh my gosh i was crying through the whole thing no lie that was very beatiful but sad uh my throat is hurting so i have to go

Haha, excellent! The last line really makes it perfect. XD

Brilliant, I loved them. Incredibly well-written.

Aw! This was so said it nearly made me cry *sniff* Poor Toph...that last line really got me. And when you think that he might be about to...I dunno...say something...then find out that he's talking about Suki...
CRUEL, SOKKA. THAT WAS JUST FREAKING CRUEL, ALL RIGHT?
*runs off to write a Sokka abuse fic*

Keep up the GREAT WORK

TTFN

*too lazy to log in. Sorry...*

Wow. I love this one. I really loved the others too and now I can't decide which one I prefer: this one, or the other Third Time. It's a tough decision because they're both so beautiful and wonderful and incredibly awesome. I guess I'll just have to say that it's a tie... Sad how Sokka didn't end up with Toph though. I mean, I appreciate the fact that you didn't go with the cliche suddenly-gets-her-man thing, but still... Ya know!

KD

Since i'm loving it so much already, i thought i'd review each section.
I simply loathe, yet love, the way toph's parents diliberatley ignore everything she says. I was getting frustrated reading about them. i love how you express the characters emotions. very well done. toph's reaction is perfect. i also love how casually you threw the "tokka" in. "the only one who has ever protected her"...loved it.

2nd review: I laughed aloud several times reading this one. toph and zuko's personalities are so fun to watch bounce off each other. she so blunt and rude ("I'm not marrying this idiot!") and he just kinda let it happens...you can tell he wants the same thing, but he doesn't show it. the ending made me squee. sokka is my hero. :D

3rd review: gah! what do you mean he won't come back!? this made me squee so hard. i simply adore the way you write tokka scenes. they are always so perfect! but what do you mean he doesn't come back!?

4th review: so, i'm cring on the inside..how could you do this to me metro? :(

i loved them all! you rock my socks. you have to be one of the most skilled writers on this site. love your work. (pardon my spelling i have a cast on my right hand) ;)


~WIC

That makes much more sense now. Poor Toph, I love this though.

>.>... I wonder... do you even read reviews. (Email is because my reviews aren't going through and I want to tell you how amazing you are! and I hope you'll let me know how D=) Well, anyhow, (short and sweet) this cleared things up magnificently, but y'know what Numbuh 3 as a stand alone thing just assuming it was Sokka was tottaly bestest. [x.x (I hate short pointless reviews)]

okay ignore my last review

i forgot to look at my inbox

my bad

Well explained

Nice chapter full of little stories

are they all in the same timeline?

and if so, who is the guy in story 3?

Jaron out

o...I got it now

Okay, s'all clear now! I was one of those confuzzled, lol. This is sweet and sad. I do wish her and Sokka would end up together somehow at the end. That would make it happier.

That's so sad...