Nice. Short and sweet! Thanks for writing it!

Oh, dear. Deathfic. :)

This is very nicely done, izzles. I really like the 'No more just-because presents' line and that Elizabeth can't cry, but feels she should. I can honestly see her reacting that way.

The final part just broke my heart.

Short, but lovely.

I do wish you'd properly labelled this as a deathfic - or at least put tragedy as one of the genre labels.

This was so beautiful, so perfect, so much like Elizabeth. And the imagery was so perfect, so real, I felt like I was there with Elizabeth. I loved this fic. Wow. I'm at a loss of words to say, this was such a beautiful story.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!

*hugs*

~fyd~

I'm sure you wrote this just to make me cry...*grabs tissues and wails*.

Its brilliant btw :)