I like this story. I've always liked Shikamaru and Temari as a pairing, and it's interesting the way they interact here. Pride, such a nasty thing...
Besides, you've made the first chapter interesting enough to make me want to whine that this one isn't your top priority fic. I know better than to do that, though, so instead just let me tell you that whenever you have more to show us, I'll be here to read it. ^^
Keep up the good work!

i like it!
update soon!

This seems like its going to end badly but I'm interested to see what your next update will be like.

oh my, she sure is fiesty. Shikamaru reminds me of Sasuke a bit

Thanks for updating. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I LURVE the fic! Can't wait until the next chappie!

wow. Just... wow. I love this pairing, but I'm concluding from your prologue, it's gonna be sad, huh? That's okay though!! I really like your writing style! You really seem to have their personalities pretty well developed, and I just really liked it! I'll be keeping an eye on this wonderful fic!

OMG

Suicidal Shika