This put such a big stupid smile on my face. I totally ship Shad/Ashei -- if you've ever read my version of Twilight Princess from Link's point of view, I'm considering doing a sequel which features them. This was a lot of fun to read and I'm definitely adding it to my favorites! Great job!

Eh, you've finished, so why critique?
The last sentence was so... sweet and...cute.
I think it all fits well enough- you weave in and out of their roles and then put theim back together in the back of the bar.
Good job.

wow. this is really good. i can't wait to read the next chapter.

This was really good and love the whole thing. "Back of the Bar"? Great Title. I always wondered what others thought of the resistance. I think you did a great job. If you're not an official author already, you should be.

I loved this, and since there are so few great stories centered around the Resistance it just makes this fic even more special. You kept everyone beautifully in character, too. Amazing job! :)

This story is so...*god.* I liked how they were so skeptical about Link. If only they knew!

This fic's really great and I think you really kept them in-character

You've done a wonderful job of keeping in line with what happened in the game and writing your own ideas in-between. At one point I actually wondered if what you wrote was actually from the game and I had just missed it ^_^'

Ohh, this was just a really fun fic to read. I'm always glad to read a nice coherency fic about these four, and I do love the Ashei/Shad... it's just so cute! I also really really, adored the little insites into links character. I know it's not suppose to be about him but I like the way you fleshed his attitude out.

So the characterization was superbly enjoyable, the details where nicely done, and the plot wasn't jumpy overdone or a bland retail of canon actions. Nice.

My fav part has got to be the conversation Rusl has with Link about killing guilt... Or the ending, the ending was awesome.

I would probably maim for a after TP fic featuring Link's interactions with these guys as he travels. (Cause I could never see him going back to ordon or -gods forbid- getting into a relationship with either Ilia or Zelda.)

Ok I've fangirled enough you awesome writer you! Hope to see more of this fandom from you.

I'm not very far yet, but I wanted to at least get this to you before I go too far. You have the ages for them all wrong. If you have a strategy guide, it will tell you an approximate age, but I'm pretty sure Auru wasn't in his 70s or Rusl in his 40s. Now maybe I'm totally wrong, (since I haven't looked at a strategy guide in like a year), but make sure you have all your source material together before you start typing up information about them.

This was great. I liked it a lot. Resistance-centric stories are always interesting, especially since there ARE so few of them. (And those that are there are a little hard to find, since FFN STILL needs to put the TP characters on the list, so one can't narrow down the search.)
I liked this ending. Having Link leave all those notes for Shad and then Ashei kissing him...just great. :D

Loved that story! I think it's a shame that no one has written more about 'the group' I was inspired by your story to write one featuring the four characters. I also like the Sages, I think someone needs to write a story about them to, I mean mix it up, invent your own sages I did, (see penname) anyhow please write another story.

Hey great fic!! I love Ashei's character , she is like so cool.(I always like the tomboyish girl characters).Any how I think it was really funny that Ashei ended up drunk, that was so her. Her and Shad at the end was funny, especially when she said, "What this ?" and kissed him! ha ha ( still laughing ) Also Shad reminds me of Wesly from "Angel". But enough about that, it was a great fic, lots of humor, which I liked I think it was a good idea to post a story about The Group considering not very many others have. Great story, I look forward to your next fic, featuring The Group, maybe a lemon between Shad and Ashei? Just a thought. Bye.

That was a great story. I'm glad someone other than me realised how important these four are. I just finished the game myself and wanted to see what stories people had for it. I like how you paired Ashei and Shad. When I played the game I wondered if they were the same age and if they had any relationship. Ashei's pretty cool and should have more stories about her. I wish you well in the future.
Alex

An extremely satisfying ending. :) I'm so glad this is how you did it, conversations...and the last line made me really happy, for some reason. Well, I think I'll try and save an overall review for when I finish Twilight Princess for myself (which probably won't be until the summer >8C; and I'm not sure why to wait, because I did not need to play to get into the story...but I think reading this again will be my incentive to finish??), but I did not even need to play to love the characters and the way you wrote this...such good stuff!! Well, I hope you write again soon...if not for Resistance, for something else?...

...Please?!

X3 Great work.

Completely satisfying.