I LOVE it. You hit on so many important character points! Well done
-Chris

This was adorable - one of my favorite things about Numb3rs is watching the interplay between these two siblings - I just love it! This sounds just like a conversation these two would have. I love how you had Don call Charlie "Buddy" just like in the show!

Very nice.

Very nice! You did a good job with dialogue and setting and circumstances are perfectly
logical.

Do you have more stories for us?

Great job this is one of the best onshots I've read. its realistic and simple. thanks. :)

Really Good!

I really enjoyed this, though I did chuckle at the line about Charlie's "pure heart". Charlie does get turned into such a little saint in fic. I guess it's easier to write him that way than to deal with the far more complicated man portrayed on the show - the man who once confessed to wanting to do his brother serious damage in High School, and who Larry once described as a "talented theoritician with an ego problem."