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| JennCorinthos 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseHey this was great... Loved it... Love the flashblack... JENNIFER |
| ReJo 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you made the card significant, because I was so mad that she left without telling him face-to-face that I was shocked that he could possibly smile while reading that card. You put it into a context that made his smile believable. |
| my-sparkles 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHere I am gain! ;) lol Okay, what can I say? Hum... First - those cow jokes are great! *bursts into laughing* Trust me, they made me laugh a lot! But what I really love is the meaning of this cow jokes to Danny - it's his link to Lindsay, to a brave and funny Lindsay. Quoting - "Instead he was locked out by the only heart he had ever wanted to know completely and possess for his own. He need not have worried about being detected for she never saw him standing there with his heart in his eyes and the pain on his face." I love these lines because it just gives him away, no masks hiding what he's feeling! Quoting - "He could never have imagined, in a million years that hearing cow jokes from a country girl could be such a turn on. His favorite though had been when she had snuck up behind him in the lab on his birthday and whispered in his ear, “Happy MO-day to you!” Everything about that moment had sent a blaze of desire surging through his body: the way she leaned over his shoulder, her hair brushing tantalizingly across his neck, her sweet scent suffusing the air around him, her warm breath tickling his ear and the vision of her lips in that delicious pucker. If they had been alone in the lab, he would have snagged her and planted a hard kiss on her lips as appropriate payback for that little trick, but he consoled himself that he’d catch her after work.! - So sweet! *wub* & *squee* he's so wrapped up in his feelings for her! ;) Quoting - "“I don’t think the cows are gonna help us out here,” he remarked grimly. “No, I’d say they are heading home on this one,” she replied faintly." - Silent support and complicity that only shows up when two people are deeply connected. Loved it! :) Quoting - "Many MOO’s to you too Montana and hurry home ‘cause I’m waiting!" That's Danny... *sighs happily* Moorvelously written, SJ! ;) Loved it 'til no-end! |
| peanut2lb 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI knew as soon as I read the title that this was your story. Don't ask me how, it was just something that popped out at me. Anyhow nice job on the explaination of "Moo" mention that in the card. I'm anxious to see if Danny will ever bring up in the show. |
| prplerayne 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI think I told you this on DLC, but I love this fic! I know Moo has to have a meaning between the two of them, and I'm so glad you wrote a fic about it! When I saw it on that card, followed by his smile, I knew that he knew what she meant by it. Very good! |
| chili-peppers 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseHehe! really loved that! great job! MOO! |
| RachelHeidi 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's cute! LC and I figured it was because right now she's the size of a small cow (or some other such joke on set that leaked into the real show). |
| Kate McT 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseLovely! You sent some bunnies my way you fiend! *Grins* Great job. |
| Ellieanna 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was adorable. I wish I had something like that, you know a cute and endearing thing about me that people would say “well only Lanna can pull that off”. I loved it. |
| supercsi4 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseToo cute! I love 'behind the scenes' stories to help explain what we actually saw play out on the screen. Great writing! |
| x-hanna-x 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was such a sweet and lovely story. Now they just have to get together =) Well done. x |
| serenity2bliss 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, I nvr heard of any of those cowjokes before. Did you made 'em up? Coz if you did, WOW! They're really funny and you did a fantastic job in connecting the jokes with the actual story line! ;) |
| marialisa 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuse...and my shipper heart goes *squee* You describe Danny's fear and hurt very well at the start QUOTE: 'she never saw him standing there with his heart in his eyes and the pain on his face' Loved the back story that explained how the joke started between them...Danny's realsiation of his feelings for her was beautifully done QUOTE: 'he recognized that he was traveling a different path with her than he’d traveled with other women that he had been attracted to. Everything about her touched him in some special and unique way and he relished taking his time, savoring each and every moment' ...and we know he'll wait for her - I'm looking forward to the follow up when she comes back (hint!) Beautiful story, clever explanation, happy *sigh* from me *hugs* |
| mercy4vr 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed how you made an actual story out of that card! Well-written and entertaining. I love how this story line and the spoilers have begun inspiring the plot bunnies. As always, I look forward to your next story! |
| labgeekluvr 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAww, that's sweet. really makes up for how TPTB have handled their relationship |