The poem is ok. But where did you come up with the idea of wufei liking quatre? I've seen the show and I don't even think that they talked to each other. All the other pairings have some sort of evidence but that one.

Eherm... you've been reading too much Hamlet and the required poems for this quarter, dear... it's even taking over your fanfic life... :) Anyway... I will not say I like poems... I will simply say that this is a piece that does not require thought to be appreciated (there does that sound better?) I hate paraphrasing so go figure. If I land myself in a nice play you're the first one I'm calling ;) It just tends to be a bit messy when they all interrupt each other (it takes a lot of visualization in my part... but who cares :) that's all... :)

interesting...original idea you have there. kinda like shakespeare, but kinda not-- you really have a knack for poetry though. i liked it

I like this poem! I don't usually read fanpoems but this one is one of my favorites now! I hope you'll write a sequel to this!

I like it. Other than a few things, like Wufei liking Quatre, that i personally don't see, i love your story. Your story is good, seriously.

Interesting. I think I like it. It's a nice touch that this whole thing was a poem. Well written. I suppose this means you like Fushigi Yuugi. Cool I'm glad someone else does.

love it