You have a gift, mate! I must say this was outstanding, but sad all at once. Good job!

Oh. My. Gosh. That's all I can say.

oh my gosh I LOVED IT! *cries* wow mate excellent

wow that story was bloody amazing you should be proud of it i loved it! Welldone!

oh my god.

(beautiful. amazing. heart-breaking. spine-tingling. sorrowful.)

Unlike anything I've read before.

Keep writing. soupie .

This was really lovely; a wonderful transferrence of the story. The end is so sad, but hopeful, too, knowing the fate of the original Little Mermaid.

I really enjoyed this. Keep writing!

Mayhem